Wednesday, February 25, 2009
Week 6 theme: place
I sit in my dorm look, bored out of my mind. I start to stare around the room to find something to do. Then it dawns onto me! My room is a lot like a prison cell. It is a squire concreat box with a window at the end, looking out to dumpster. The walls are white and are cold as ice as my warm skin touches it. Im surounded by four concreate walls and a big metal door. I sometimes wonder, am i being punished for going to school. The alonenesss that this room gives me is almost unbearable. Im not locked away, but I feel that I am confined to my room with nothing to do. I can feel the walls cloing in the longer I sit here and staire. I hear faint talking through the heater, its almost a faint ghostly voice that sends chills down my spine. The one light that is in the room, shines like a spotlight, as if to look at me and mock me for being in here. The light from the tv sends shadows on the walls, and it looks as if there are people laughing and pointing at me. As I take my shoes off, i feel the chill run up my legs from the concrete floor. Then as I crawl into bed i stare at the celling and it seems to be getting close and closer to me. As if the room wants me to stay where i am. Finally my eye begin to get heavy, and I drift off to sleep
Week 5 Narrative
I wake up with a splitting headache, so unbearable that even when dust would hit the floor it sounded like a bomb going off. I couldnt even open my eyes, the sun was so bright, as if the suns rays were burning holes through my eyes. although my eyes were glued shut, my tears still managed to twinkle out. My mom wispers to me. "should we go to the hospital?" I mumbled to her "yes." The travel to the hospital seemed to take hours, and the pain just seemed to get worse each foot that had passed. We arvided at the hospital, and was waiting in the room. It was dark, I needed the lights off it was to much. The room was cold, and they had me covered up in just a loin cloths. It was so cold, but i didnt care, all i could worry about was my head. It felt as if someone took a sledge hammer to my head, cracked it open and started eating my brain. The doctor came in, and they needed to do a spinal tap. I had to sit up, it was a lot of work just to do that. As the needle pierced into my spine i felt the tingling feeling running through my body. It felt like the needle was going to pierce through the other side, but then the needle was pulled out. Laying there waiting for the results was irritating. All i could keep thinking about was what is wrong with me? The room was cold, dark and empty, I felt so alone. I could hear the sink dripping, it sounded like a metal band with a drummer going crazy BANG! BANG! BANG! is all i could hear and it rattled my brain to no end. I had to struggle just to get off the bed, and the walk over was hard, I had to feel my way around my room. I felt a cold metal cylinder, it was the sink, i worked my way to find the nob and turned it off. Finally I am free from the irritating sound of the sink. The doctor comes in, and his voice echos through the room as if i were on the top of a mountain standing over a valley and yelling "HELLO......Hello....hello....hello" He tells me that I have Meningitis, and that its an infection of the brain. Hering those words, my body gets week and my stomic starts to turn. But I was informed that it wasnt deadly or catchable, and it is treatable through anti-biotics. I was then hospitalized for 2 weeks. Being confined to a bed, in a small room with just one one window, and a tv thats cable was all messed up was a horrible thing. I felt like i was in prison...It was horrible that I felt as if they were teasing me with the tv, yes it turns on, and yes there was cable. but it was fuzzy and at my distance in the room i could barely make out characters. I food was nasty, it tasted like they rolled it around in cow dung and let it set for 6 hours! Finally i was able to leave, and I can definitely say that was an experience I will never forget
Week 4....Truth or Consequences
1. Im sitting at a red light, in my car. A girl comes up next to me in a car and waves. I wave back, and the light turns green. We both leave at the same pace and hit the next red light together. We then start to laugh with one another. The light turns green and she takes off to the left. I take off to the right.
2. I pull up to a red light in my black Mazda RX6 and immediately stop. A gorgeous blonde drives up next to me in a blue honda civic. I look at her and she looks at me. Our eyes meet each other. She flicks her hair back and waves a very flirty wave. I wave back with a horny grin on my face. The light turns green! and I hit the gas and begin to speed away, but she keeps up with me. We r looking at each other then BOOM! the other light is red. I sit there, look at her and she looks at me, and i give her a wink. I rev up my engine, till the tack reads 40,000 rpms. the light turns green and I take off squealing to the right, and she takes off squealing to the left.
3. I roll up to a red light with my bouncy black Mazada RX6. I see this lady next to me and we look at each other. for a minute time stops and all i can see is her beautiful firery blue eyes look at me. I rev up the engine, and turn on the lift. I start bounching there listning to techno music and wave to her. I get a amazing smile and flirtatious wave back. SHE WANTS ME! I say, and rev up the engine, and take off as soon as the light turns green, she is next to me for 5 miles, and do not take my eyes off her, the cars in front of me, move out of my way, for they know I am a man on a mission. We stop at the next red light. I open my door and walk over to her drivers door, I swing open the door and give her the biggest kiss. She almost fainted right there, i then rested her back in her car, gave her my number and got back into my car. I then blew her a kiss, and whipped my car around the corner...
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