Monday, March 16, 2009

Week 7 Character: Rewrite

She is the one who has helped me through the worse things possible. She has truly changed me for the better as a person. This person that I speak about is my best friend here at school, her name is Jenn. At first we started as a couple, but things happened down the road and it turned out that we are much better as friends. She is someone you can go and talk to when something is wrong and she will sit there and listen. For example, I have been going through some health problems in the past few months and she has been here through it all.She has also taught me that nothing can be judged by image. Not to judge a book by its cover so to speak. I had a conversation with her one night about what she thought of me when she first met me.
"Jenn, when you first met me, what did you think of me?"
"Well first off, I thought you were very indimadating, and no personality at all"
"What? you really thought that?"
"Well you didnt speak much when I first met you, then when I got to know you, you were a great guy"
She could of given up on me when she first thought what she did, but she stuck around to see what my real potentual was. Her personality is truly out there, very adventurous and outgoing. She can always put a smile on my face when i'm upset, even when no one else can. I was having a really rough day, dealing with my health problems and she came busting into the room wearing rediculas cloths and says "Hey its time to cheer up!" I had asked "why?" and her response was "because I am here, and theres no need to sit alone and dwell over it, thats why!"
Some people always talk about people and how they help them, and yes there are other people out there that I've met through the years, but none have made an impression in my life as she did. She made me want to be the person i am today, and made me realize that everything in life happens for a reason, even if it isn't good at first, it all works out in the end. I was able to experience my first feeling of love with her, yes i've had relationships in the past, but none was like how i felt with her. Even though the experience was for a short while, i still wouldn't take any of it back. When I told her some things that were going on in my past she was the only one that didn't shed a tear in front of me and didn't leave when so many others did. So I guess what Im trying to say is that people usually only meet one person in their life that truly makes an impression, and I have found that person, and we are best friends. I wouldn't want it any less!

1 comment:

  1. I like the added material very much. Good quotations and dialogue. This gives a real picture of the person.

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