Sunday, May 3, 2009

Week 13 - Small to big Rewrite

Whenever i first meet someone they always tell me that what attracts me to them is my eyes. My beautiful blue eyes. Well thats what color they are for now. My eye color changes during the seasons. I enjoy my eyes, not only because its a grabber for the ladies! But also because i enjoy having sight. To be able to see my family, friends, a loved one. I always melt in the wonderful sights that winter brings, the beautiful glimmering off the tops of hills an trees as the sun hits it. Or how about the beautiful colors that fall brings. The clashes of red, yellow, brown and orange is like heaven to me. It cant get any better then that. But not only do i see a wonderful scenery or a beautiful girl. But I see the dispare and destruction that we as humans cause to this beautiful earth. I see the destruction that we do to ourselves as well. I see the winters becoming longer and the summers becoming shorter. Im afraid the end is near. Notradomus  believed that the world would end in just a big bang. That it would happen so fast. I dont see this happening. I see that slowly we are killing ourselves off with pollution and and starvation. Soon all our resources will be gone and there will be nothing left. Our monitary system has been depleated to almost no end. I see the world ending in blood and desease and mutation over countries defending themselves with nuclear war I'm afraid the end time is near.I see  the O-zone being destroyed and we are left to bake in the cering naked rays of the sun. There will be no human, nor the littlest orginism to survive the destruction we put on ourselves. There will be nothing left, just a destroyed rock floating in space. I see all this happening if things dont change and quick in our future.

1 comment:

  1. I still like that opening very much and the close is clearly where those eyes need to go and what they need to describe.

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