Tuesday, March 10, 2009
Week 7 Character
She is the one who has helped me through the worse things possible. She has truly changed me for the better as a person. This person that I speak about is my best friend here at school, her name is Jenn. At first we started as a couple, but things happened down the road and it turned out that we are much better as friends. She is amazing all around. She is someone you can go and talk to when something is wrong and she will sit there and listen. She has also taught me that nothing can be judged by image. Not to judge a book by its cover so to speak. Her personality is truly out there, very adventurous and outgoing. She can always put a smile on my face when i'm upset, even when no one else can. My first impression on her was that she was a very quiet girl, who kept to herself. But once I got to know her she truly came out of her shell. Some people always talk about people and how they help them, and yes there are other people out there that I've met through the years, but none have made an impression in my life as she did. She made me want to be the person i am today, and made me realize that everything in life happens for a reason, even if it isn't good at first, it all works out in the end. I was able to experience my first feeling of love with her, yes i've had relationships in the past, but none was like how i felt with her. Even though the experience was for a short while, i still wouldn't take any of it back. She can be a "character" as you describe but its definitely a good thing. SHe has the most unique personality I have ever seen and that is what brings me closer to her. When I told her some things that were going on in my past she was the only one that didn't shed a tear in front of me and didn't leave when so many others did. So I guess what Im trying to say is that people usually only meet one person in their life that truly makes an impression, and I have found that person, and we are best friends. I wouldn't want it any less
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JD--too much! Too many words for the amount of content, too much repetition. YOu repeat yourself because you're not sure you're making your point, and you're right--you're not. This piece is starving and needs some food--and that would be a story, a specific story about Jenn, and maybe some dialogue. Right now there's nothing here to remember, but a story (and some cuts in the writing) will bring it into focus. Try a rewrite.
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